WHAT THE HECK? Why'd she have to die? Gah... Good story though I really felt it.

sob

so sad

:(

i like the way you wrote this story though

it was a really good and it was easy to follow D

i dunno why you are so god at making stories! lol. awesome! sweet too...

what! ..why'd she have to die...I hate these endings but these one shot was pretty good

Hahaha, wow. That was REALLY good. And quite a different ending than what I expected, but that was nice. It was really kind of sad, too. Great job!

oh my holy gosh! i so love it...ur a really great writer

My heart is bleeding right now, and my tears are invading my eyes. The whole time I read the first part, I was thinking, "Aw, how sweet! He loves her. And they're both so out of reach."

And then the accident.

Oh, my poor, poor heart. :'(

(I can clearly relate to the story... being unable to tell someone you love him, and knowing that it would be best to do so...)

The pain!

This is so freakin' sad. Why couldn't you have had a little more compassion *sob* It was *sob* good nonetheless *sob*

wow this is amazing

omg - this was soo sad!

great writing as usual

The Blues by Switchfoot is one of my favourite songs ever

it was a good choice of lyrics for this story i think

xForBlueSkiesx

This piece was a heart-breaker... I loved it... It felt real (Does that make any sense?). Keep up the good work!

Bye,

Alison

That was sad. That was definitely sad.

And they never find out until it's too late. Such a shame...

This one was alike with your other one-shot, "Latte at First Sight" with the fact that the characters are alike. He's popluar and has everything, she's a nobody with barely anything - and they're in love.

However, I did like the fact that you changed it; how the endings are not the same. That was a definitely a good thing. Had they been the same... I guess I wouldn't have enjoyed it as much - but that's just a personal preference.

Good job!

Very nice short, though I'm not normally into romances, I think that ones with bitter or sad endings are the best. I thought the emotion in this was vdisplayed very nice and worthy of the reading.

I'm crying waterfalls here. Sniffle.

NO! SHERY DON'T DIE! Aw, how cute was that? I think it was really good!