You know.. usually i don't review all that much but this is a story that made my hand uncontrollably move the mouse towards the submit review button.. and well.. i guess here I am.

Okay okay.. sorry for that nonsense up there. but man.. this is a BRILLIANT story. and I just read your profile and found out that you're a Chinese. Well, that just makes me so ashamed of myself for I'm a Chinese too and I can no way in hell write a story like that. anyway.. great job!

And good luck writing more!

kay. first of all. thanks soo much for the review! )) you made my day. n id try to make improvements yeahs. DD

okay. this story is interesting! i so wished she hadnt die! that is so. *sighs* sad. i was like. "no! dont die on me now! LOL.

your english is way good! wowwneess. ahaha

i bet you're really clever right?you take lyk higher chinese and pure yeah. very daa clever. heheh

WELL. GOODbye for now fellow singaporean.

n btw. i LOVE HADY MIRZA! . just had to put that in. sorry. lol

oh my god.

i seriously love your one shots. they're just so captivating and. . .i don't know, it's just so GOOD. okay, on to THIS one. . .

I CAN'T. BELIEVE. THAT. SHE. DIED! didn't she ever hear of looking both ways before crossing? ahh...man, that sucks ass. he loved her (it's kind of weird that after six yrs, he still did, though) but he didn't tell her. well, i sort of understand that since why would he confess his undying love for her when they barely spoke? i mean he had like, what? three, four years in highschool? he could've went to visit her- tried to court her or something. . .ugh, but she died. and she loved him too. right? i can't just get over that. SHE DIED.

uggh.

lmfao, anyway, i love your stories. and your writing style and your plots. (: they rock. bwha. keep it up, yeah?

-xoxluurve.

"But yet, he wanted to know more. Her middle name, her favourite food, her taste in music, her favourite hobby… Anything, anything to get to know her better."

Exactly.

This was sad, but excellent nonetheless.

Hey, thanks for the review and all those suggestions (I guess it IS a little extreme to throw a violin like that; xD)! Now I'm here to return the favor. _

This piece was nicely written; it's so fluid! I love the comparison and contrast in the first paragraph. I felt that the only concern with this is the REASON for their love. How can two people that never really talked love each other? Perhaps they could have been childhood friends or neighboors. I realize that my suggestion is a tad bit cliche, but it's an adequate solution to the question of "how".

All in all, though, an enjoyable read. )

i don't like sad endings too! but i don't know why sad endings leave a deeper impression on me!

Hm. I've gotta be honest, I think you could've done much better than this. I've read your other stuff. This is...pretty juvenile. I'm not saying this to insult you, just to help you. First of all, he didn't love her. He couldn't. He didn't know her. The things he "loved" her for, they were beyond superficial. Like her tucking her hair behind her ear. In one of my one-shots, the character mentions the exact same thing. But it was just something he liked about her. You don't love someone based on mannerisms.

So, it was hard to take the rest of the story seriously when you're thinking, "What on earth does he love about her?" It doesn't even make sense.

That said, there were some very well-written parts. At the end when you describe his tear falling, "Greedily feeding upon the droplet; disappearing forever into the dark-coloured stone" That was poetry. Very beautiful. A beautifully written story still can't cover up a weak plot. SO, my point is (yes, this IS a positive critique!) keep up the writing, keep practicing, because you do have a way with words. But try to be a bit more...believable with the plots. :) Keep it up.

Gah! I hate romantic sad endings, it makes me sad too. x( It was a good story plot though. Man, if only...

That was really sad, how he never got to tell her and all, wow.

x(

Keep up the great work!

Yeah after reading that I'm not feeling too great either. But maybe that's also because of putting off my studies like you. Nice job. I really like it.

So great! heh. I gotta go do homework. :) ciao. Oh, did I mention that that was incredibly depressing? You should do a prologue where he commits suicide and they meet in heaven. :) lol...jk. ciao.

This almost made me cry. It's a cliche, but a wonderfully told cliche, nonetheless.

I mean, who can't love them? This is a wonderful story for all the romantics waiting out there.

Hmms...you could have had more emotions, but otherwise...great work!-Your junior.

Hey! So, I really like this story and I love that I got to read it before anyone else :) Haha. I never expected Sherry to die at the end, that was so sad! And he didn't even had the chance to tell her that he loved her. Poor guy... I really envy your writing style. You choose the exact right words to expres their emotions. I love it! I love the thought that someone can be completely in love with a person, without really knowing each other. OMG, thank you so much for mentioning my story. I can't believe you did that! It was my pleasure helping you, I love reading your stuff. I've got to go prepare myself for my English exam now. Keep up the great work and I hope you're going to get many reviews for this!X Lien

I liked this story. A little overly tragic at the end, but hey, you have creative license to do whatever the heck you want with your characters, including letting them get hit by moving vehicals! :P Some of your prose seems a bit unimaginative, but in other places it's quite nice. Overall, I liked this piece, and it doesn't seem to need much editing. I wish I could say the same for my stuff. LOL.

Great short. I really liked the emotion captured within, and the way you portrayed the characters cared about each other silently and for a long time.