Reviews for Layers
John Petersons chapter 1 . 11/8/2006
Very interesting. I like it 7.5 out of 10.
daydreamer1347 chapter 1 . 9/22/2006
o, i love it so far. the dog sounds so beautiful
Ilwase Believe chapter 1 . 9/20/2006
i agree with edward, very good writing and pacing, though it could've gone a BIT slower

i also agree with your first reviewer, however, that the idea that wolves didnt talk could've been introduced before the speaking
Edward 04612 chapter 1 . 9/19/2006
I have to say that reading this was very...creepy...Either way, this is great writing, however my head is still trying to catch up with the events in the story. So yeah, it has good pacing. Almost too good. Well anyway, thank you for reviewing my work, and I will continue to do so for your work!
Lizzykai chapter 1 . 9/19/2006
Oh! Fantasy! You know how I
Night's Delusion chapter 1 . 9/19/2006
Very interesting. Wolves, magic. I will say that it seems like you played some cards too early. When the wolf talks it didn't really mean much. By that I mean, it could have had a more "magical" feel. It could have made me say, "Who was that?" At the same time as Satchiko. But I had to read farther to know this was not nromal. Maybe you should start a little bit earlier and build up to this scene. Then again, maybe I should shut up.