|Reviews for My Mask|
| Frances Gumm chapter 1 . 11/1/2006
#1-This is Liza McFarland, just FYI
#2-This is absolutely beautiful! I love the emotions portrayed by the lines and spacing. I also enjoy the moulin rouge quote at the bottom :). But, in all seriousness, this is wonderful!
| Lauren is lazy chapter 1 . 10/3/2006
Wonderful piece of work! I completely and totally understand what you mean in this poem (after all, I've written about similar topics...duh, Lauren)
You capture the fear and reality of showing someone every ounce of you and portray it in your own voice. Loverly.
But now I'm curious...who is the subject you are writing to my hear? Hmm?
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 9/19/2006
Well expressed. Very well done. Even if it is sad! Keep writing.