Reviews for Night Dance
Yorick's-Skull chapter 1 . 3/19/2007
I didn't really follow but I loved the last section,

It is very relatable, if thats a word, even if your not exactly sure of the direct meaning.

Keep up the good work, and thanks for the reviews. :)
felicia13 chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
Like themes in a few of these poems. Almost as if you strung them all together, the world would make sense. Good thing we're not reading them in order, then.

"Loving to leaving" Pretty true. Perhaps ...

Thanks for adding me to your fav authors list! And the reviews were nice, too.

Felicia.
ten pts above average chapter 1 . 9/27/2006
I'll be honest I didn't follow...but I really really loved the way you ended this...from "Majesty to Mystery" on is amazing...
spiffy-sophia chapter 1 . 9/25/2006
I like this! Especially that last part with the alliteration..."sex to screaming, fighting to fucking, waiting to whipping," and so on...it had a rhythm...nice.
Sir Scott chapter 1 . 9/20/2006
Pleasure to pain, gladness to sadness. I can relate to this poem.

Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, ~SirScott~
Terence the Terrible chapter 1 . 9/20/2006
Feels like this one comes from a dark and dangerous place...the place within each of us where we store our hate, our anger, and our carnal thoughts. I like this piece a lot...especially the last stanza and the ending line. I know what it's like to write outside of your own voice...it's a weird feeling, but when you nail it (as you have here) it's a potent thing to be sure. Keep writing!