Reviews for Unknown Pain
Emmy Lynn chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
Wow. Strong emotions. It kinda made me mad though -_- not at you or the poem... just mad...
a-random-writer chapter 1 . 9/21/2006
wow...i loved it...very angst-ridden...she loves the one who ignores her and it is equivilent to someone beating her...right?..i hope that is what you were trying to convey and if it wasn't, it was still an awesome poem! _
RomanceDeceptionist chapter 1 . 9/19/2006
I am going through the same exact feeling as you are...and it really does hurt, especially when you are millions of miles away from that person...great job, love the poem entirely.
PocoSnow15 chapter 1 . 9/19/2006
I've known that feeling for over nine years and counting... Great first poem! Fabulous job! Keep writing!