aw! i love it!

your talented : )

keep writing...

Liz

Oh I REALLY like this, it's very good and sexy. I like the whole tango part with "The steam of sweat, the heaving breaths" Great!

What a great poem- there's so much going on here. I love your use of italics, almost a step-by-step replay of what's going on through the individual's mind. It seems like it's a game these two play, yet neither wants to act. Great job.

Wow, I love this poem! That's EXACTLY what it's like!