Reviews for spectacle
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 11/9/2006
Oh, what a gorgeous image. I love your use of rhyme in the second line, and yes, just pretty. Keep writing! :)
Aquafied chapter 1 . 10/4/2006
mm, night before the rain

everyone has their favorite depiction of it

and this is quite near minebut with a touch less moisture
cornered.sensations chapter 1 . 9/30/2006
That truly is a spectacle, creates such wonderful imagery, great work
polka dots and addictions chapter 1 . 9/24/2006
this has stuck nicely to the proper haiku format, and its nicely written. Thanks for the review. ~Bex xx
Chaos Apple chapter 1 . 9/24/2006
You manage to show us this wonderful scene in 17 syllables. Gorgeous.

I adore your haikus.

Love, Alice
bread and circuses chapter 1 . 9/23/2006
I am in awe of your haikus. This one even has some rhyme. Your imagery is astounding.
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 9/23/2006
incredibly powerful image.
water lily nymph chapter 1 . 9/23/2006
bravo! a shower of images with so few words. splendid. fantastic. like a cinderella night on parade...
bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 9/22/2006
Beautiful haiku. Great work.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 9/21/2006
Wonderful motion and visual aspects. This really swims vividly. Great haiku.
Aluminum Tinkerbell chapter 1 . 9/21/2006

I love how amazingly poetic and eloquent you are. It's amazing how much can be convayed in just three lines!
citrus scented chapter 1 . 9/21/2006
honestly, this is so beautiful. the image you manage to create and conjure up in this...its hauntingly vivid and beautiful.
arcane devices chapter 1 . 9/20/2006
A haiku that speaks much with very little. Thank you for the entertaining read, and I'll see you on your next update. - Arcane Devices