Reviews for Beautiful Girl
The Candle Thief chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
Hell, I look like a troll. Who's complaining? _

-Ramen
LaineLove chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
Wow this is really good I had to help a friend with an eating disorder and I still have to sometimes it's hard and I can really relate to this poem I hope you keep it up
DarkBlysse chapter 1 . 4/11/2007
Wow. I know how you feel. I've got a friend who's going through the same thing. I just can't understand why she does what she does, and it hurts me so much to know she's suffering like that.

Great work, and I hope your friend gets help for her problem.
tesa131313 chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
Since you based this off an actual person it makes this poem very sad and powerful. Have you shown this to your friend? You should definately. It will show her you care
bookface31 chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
Intense poetry, and it really strikes me hard because when I was younger, I had an eating disorder.

I don't anymore.

If you need any advice on how to help her, or what to do when you're having problems, just ask me. My e-mail is .

All you can do for now is be her friend, tell her how beautiful she is, help her when she's down, and take baby steps. You can do it!

-bOOkface31-
All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 9/24/2006
Beautiful job. Full of emotion, and very
SirScott chapter 1 . 9/21/2006
That was touching. I think more and more asre waking up and realizing that thin isn't beautiful.

Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, SirScott
Alyssa's Attic chapter 1 . 9/21/2006
Beautiful, i like how you have written it from a friends point of view you dont see that on here often, great job!
Talia chapter 1 . 9/21/2006
Such a pretty piece! You may want to fix 'dieing' thought. It's 'dying' that you want to use. :D