Reviews for Magic
del chapter 1 . 9/23/2006
hey wow that was not what i had expeced when u were askin about his name, lol, but wow ali that was good, i'm curious 2 no more about the child, its good!
Delandred chapter 1 . 9/21/2006
Great job, it waqs really good. I saw one near the end when he goes to the tent for the second time, it says "worried expressions on all buy Niro's face." Doesnt totally make sense, that was all i spotted. Ill look forward to seeing where this is going. If you have time could you review Kareaphon Prophecy for me please?