Reviews for Upward
sarah1491 chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
Amazing. Great imagery portrayed in the poem. Even though haiku poetry is short, you are able to pull it off so well... in every single haiku you write. Wonderful job! :)

Aquafied chapter 1 . 10/4/2006
crack, what a mystical word

this reminds me of black velvetexcept more tasteful
Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 9/23/2006
This made me smile - I've got a friend to forward it to :) How about dropping the comma from the second line?
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/22/2006
I loved the imagery; beautiful.

classic violet chapter 1 . 9/21/2006
second and last line are totally mind-blowing beautiful. divine and creative. i simply love the diction in this.