Reviews for Shaken
onyxdragonflyy chapter 1 . 9/25/2006
beautiful! After reading the 2 of yours poems.. i feel the need to write something myself now...

My fav line:"These cries ripped forth, from my soul,Bleed petals of blackened red"

heart wrenching thought. *le sigh* truely a beautiful peice!
Dragons Willow chapter 1 . 9/24/2006
i like this one...have i read it b4? anyway i like the second stanza: "These cries ripped forth, from my soul,

Bleed petals of blackened red

I slit the wrist to watch it scream

Wishing it was just a dream"

it's beautiful...and sad and morbid and i luv it!...off to fave it!