Reviews for Frozen
onyxdragonflyy chapter 1 . 9/25/2006
I loved the whole thing! My fave part was the ending tho! Very captivating!
Dragons Willow chapter 1 . 9/24/2006
THIS WAS AWESOME! this is one of my favorites that u've written in awhile! the whole things is!..i feel this way ur caught in an escapable cage but u can't get out cuz the edges cut too deep and tho u live for the pain...u can't escape tho u want too...this reminds me of something i have in one of my poems..maybe thats why i like the idea so much! this is awesome! u need to put this on a BG and post in on my space..on ur page!~(. .)~
brokendreams21 chapter 1 . 9/21/2006
Interesting way of writing. I like it. It's very effective. Awesome job.
The Melancholy Cocoa Bean chapter 1 . 9/21/2006
'these tears that burn / this acid rain'

the format takes a while for the eyes to adjust to, yet i like this. short and bitter sweet, each line so moving and heartfelt. keep it up :)
Teao Girl chapter 1 . 9/21/2006
I would have to say that the presentation really makes this poem. It's an idea that could easily do wrong, but you have pulled it off wonderfully!