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forgot to comment how good this chapter was too

i'm sure dimitre doesn't mind the ties *cough*

but i'm REALLY sure that curse had to do something with tanaka's choices

maybe dimitre can use the tie to keep hana from killing tanaka

XD

It's been decided.

You're evil.

No one else could have so many cliffies. And you just keep piling on that suspense! It's like... WHOA! I think that I may snap one day and run around yelling "OH EM GEE WHAT ARE TANAKA AND KOJI AND DIMITRE GONNA DO NEXT ANSWER ME DAMMIT ANSWER ME!" and yeah. I'm special.

All right. Well, I think that Nekoro and Taketo are going to make for a very interesting twist in this story. It's like... what's gonna happen next?

Hah. You've officialy gotten me obsessed with the Manga genre here. And I've been inspired to start my own. I think I scare my friends with my obsessed-ness. It's actually pretty funny. But I blame you.

AEI!

I LUV IT!

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*faint*

sometimes ur r too much too handle

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*still squealing and fainting*

Dude. That's awesome. Lol, I especially loved how Tanaka gave Dimitre ties.

Tie.

You are a genius. That was just MADE of win and awesome.

I love you.

Huh. Well, there's not much to comment on, since... well, that was more like a filler chap than anything else... so I shall glide (yes, glide) my way onto the next one.

After reading this in one or two sittings, I must say...this is friggin' amazing. This is one of the few stoires I've found that is actaully worth reading.

But now, I have a few question. How long has this entire incident been going on? Is it recent, or a long term thing? And what's the history of the Council? Like, why was it created? And why do the Guardians just seem to know all of these different spells?

If possible, I'd love to see these answered in future chapters. Thanx, and keep up the good work.

e! you left a cliffie! no!

ooh interesting dilemma. Aviant is a really strange falcon/guy sorcerer. But I just have one question. Why is it that just about every guy that Tanaka runs into, they're always so bent on being a jerk to her? I feel bad for the poor girl; she needs to find herself a caring boyfriend or something. Lest she grows up to hate all men in general. She is just really unlucky.

Interesting chapter; the weird strange golem thing was...really weird and strange. Lol, I barely remember who Hitomi is...well I forgot, but I'm too lazy to go and look it up again. She wasn't the one who pushed her in the pool was she? That's can't seem right. The fight with the golem was cool because Koji got to kill it in a remarkably brutal way. I can't wait to see who the Falcon is or who it belonged to. And then the random scene slide to the US? Things look like they're going to get hectic. More characters are always fun though. I can't wait to see what kind of guardians they are.

O.O TWO MORE CHAPTERS SOMETIME NEXT WEEK! I LOVE YOU!

And I didn't see any mistakes in this chapter XD *Wipes tears* They grow up so fast... Ah, sorry, a strange me moment XD

Anyway, would leave a better review, but je suis in a bit of a hurry at the mo'. So... yeah. I'll be waiting the for the next (awesome!) chapter.

You know, I WOULD be upset with this ending, but you posted both chapters at the same time! Yay! I like this new program! It's happened, what, twice now? YAY! Hah.

Well, I saw about three or four mistakes in this chapter. Just the usual, a typo here, changed verb tense there, etc. No worries, it's getting better!

Now, I'm off to read the next chapter XD

I'm so happy i could die of happiness but i can't becuz i must take my role as nekoro and fight bad guys! XD

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w00T!

u don't know how much aggravating hours i had to wait for this

Tanaka's sick!

Plz send her my concerns

I'm not usually into this type of manga story, but this one seems okay. I'll give it a couple more chapters. It should go unsaid that there are typos thoughout the three chapters.

Example:

“Err,” Dimitre started, scratching your head. “I guess you can say that. I mean, this one hasn’t been eating souls for awhile and its skin is falling off. Right now, it’s probably hiding in the shadows.”

Shouldn't it be his head? There are others like this here and there, but I don't feel like typing them. Now that you know, I'll leave this subject alone.

Secondly, What I don't understand is: 1) The story states that Koji recongnized Dimitre from when he was hitting Hana during lunch , but this scene doesn't even exist. Did Koji care at all, or...? This info could have been expanded to further define Koji's character. By showing what level his and Hana's relatesonship is at, and possibly help foreshadow the possiblity of other romantic relatesonships. 2) I don't understand how Koji can simply accept this whole situation with such ease? While I haven't gotten far into the story, even now he should be debating this a little more in his mind. Instead of taking it with such ease, but then again it is manga-esqe style and in most mangas, people just accept it. But, I still say this was another missed opportunity to expound on Koji's character thought process.

I really enjoy reading this. the characters plot and settings as well as details are really creativei'm excited to see the next update

nice

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