Hah, that's kind of funny about the reason for the demon character's appearance. Well, the story is coming along and as far as plot goes, It's interesting. I'll be waiting to see how Koji, Tanaka, and Dimitri interact together. They have such odd personalities. After first Koji was sort of a "didn't care about anyone" kind of guy and Tanaka was really shy. Now Dimitri comes along with his "Tanaka baby! It's me remember!" sort of flamboyant gestures and Tanaka is no longer quiet and shy but more angry and irritatated, meanwhile Koji is still someone who doesn't really care about anyone but himself. Tanaka seems to be changing alot, so it'll be interesting to see how Dimitiri and Koji change too.

I had a question about their powers though, do they just sort of make up anything they want and that becomes a spell? Or do they have schools that they are closer associated with (fire mastery, air mastery, earth mastery, etc). I'm intrigued by the Council granting wishes and creating guardians, that sounded really cool when Alix explained how Tanaka and Dimitri met. And is it just me or is Koji a playboy who can't keep his hands off women? He irritates me to no end...but that's just me. I hope the story continues to unfold, I'll keep an eye on it.

It's not my cup of tea, but I think I might end up reading more of this. What that means specifically, is that you're a pretty good story-teller. I like the detail, characters, and realistic personalities. Even if I don't particularly care for the subject matter, it's so good I might force myself to read it anyway.

I was sorta right-ish about Dimitre... kinda. Yeah. Eheh... So, again with the cliffie, huh? GEEZ! NOT COOL!

Herm... saw a few mistakes here and there... though the only one that really bothered me was that, first, Naoko says she's in the second grade, and later she says the fourth... and I just found that strange, since I don't know what grade she's in now (even though it prolly doesn't matter...) So I'll just settle for third, since it's right in the middle... and yeah.

Well, that's it XD Wow, you update so much faster than I do... it's unbelievable, you know. But oh, well. Half the world would update faster than me, so that's okay! Can't wait for an update!

(I should prolly update my stories, too, so people don't think I'm dead and hold a funeral for me... because they so would, even if they didn't know me.)

This is totally well-written. ;PIt kind of reminds me of Bleach though..with the 13 council (captains).. and the imperfect golems (Bound) but it's a really cool plot and I'm looking forward to see more _

xxjackie

Do you have, like, this OBSESSION with cliffies? It's not FAIR! And you do them so well... I'm always wondering what's going to happen next. Whereas, when I attempt cliffies, everyone's all like, "ZOMG! I KNOW WHAT COMES NEXT! I'M JUST THAT SPECIAL!" and yeah. Not cool.

GAH! WHO'S DIMITRE! What does he want with Tanaka? I have an idea, but they seem too obvious, so I won't even state them, and I'll just see if I'm right XD Because I'm weird like that.

Anyway. Yeah. Update.

(I heart dinosaurs. No idea why I felt compelled to tell you that, but I did. Rawr.)

I guess it was good, I mean I didn't have any problems with it, atleast I read it. I'l give you points on this, good work.

Peace

Darket

*Blink* Council? I need an update, girl, and I need it now! I knew that Tanaka girl would be different since she appeared in his room... and yeah. Eheh... I suck at giving reviews, sorry! Keep up the excellent work, though! I'll be watching!

Excellent... not good not bad, just extremely superb. Please continue with this (or I shall summon my purple people who will corrupt you in your sleep mwahahaha!)