|Reviews for My Insomnia|
| Mechcozmo chapter 1 . 9/21/2006
Great imagery and metaphors. Much better than mine in terms of being 'poetic'. Not sure I'm so keen on the line "Dreams are not an option / When the very silence rings." I like it overall, great job!
| brokendreams21 chapter 1 . 9/21/2006
O. Creepy, but still pretty and elegant. 'Tis good. I know the feeling. Keep on writing!