im loving it

I love your story and Cole is so adorble!

I am not upset about the whole devil thing but I don't get how she never finds out about the cat or luster gets upset about being owned. I think you made her seem a bit stupid oblivious and hypocritical ( because of William too ) that she couldn't and still doesn't see it. It almost seems like he made her like him is the way I see it. I'm a bit upset about that but it was creative. :)

I caught your little Rolling Stones song reference there in the chapter title.

I got two things to say about this story : first I loved it one of the best I've read no lie and second DAMN YOU! You made me really really like Lucifer -whimpers- way more than I should ecspecially when he whispered I'm sorry

I loved this story! I have always been a fan of Devil/Human pairings, so I greatly appreciate this fic. Thank you for writing this wonderful story. I hope to be able to read more fics as good as this one.

- Failisse

Great story. :D

~OrangeKiss

Thank you for writing this story! I loved it! Though I wish it was a bit longer. The characters were well portrayed and the story flowed nicely. I also loved Vance/Lucifer. Sure he's the one who causes all the misery and horrible things in this world, but if you can think of why he does it one might understand a little. Master of anger, greed, lust, etc, all those negative feelings he puts on others, but in order to be a master, he would also need to feel them. So that means he would also feel sadness, loneliness, longing, grief. I try not to think about it too much though.

Anyways, loved your story! I rate it an honorable 8/10 D

IF U DID DO A SPIN-OFF OR SOMETHING, CAN IT BE FOCUSING ON COLE...IN THE FUTURE LIKE WHEN HES 20 OR SOMETHING (MAYBE 220 IF YOU WANNA DO SOMETHING FUTURISTIC)...I JUST THINK ADULT COLE WOULD BE A GREAT STORY :)

It's so cute! XD I love it!

That was absolutely a wonderful read! :D

I love Cole- adorable, and sweet! ;)

I don't really know what else to say, except that I enjoyed it truly... and I'll let my action speak for how much I liked it- *clicking the Add to Faves button* ;D

Ooh! I've been reading this and enjoying it a lot. :D

Well, I also read your A/Ns after each chappie!

I would just like to say that I'm totally fine about Lucifer having a good side! ;D

I'm not just saying that because I want him to love Aaliyah either... LOL

I just firmly believe about 'balance' and 'opposites'... and that there's really NO right and wrong in the world- it's just people who decides/labels things like that. *rollseyes*

So, I don't think even Lucifer can be ALL EVIL... and that God is ALWYAS GOOD and PERFECT... I mean, sure he's GOD and he's the DEVIL- but really their actions can be classified as good and bad depending on everyone's view of things... Like how God does 'bad' things to people to teach them lessons in life. Or how in here, Vance/Lucifer destroyed atsdude's life, but made it better for everyone else who has been fooled by the man's facade. :D

Well... that's all, I guess. Sorry for rambling! XD

I bet her boyfriend's really a cheater... and just has a few counsins or supposed family members in on it! LOL

But maybe that's just me over-thinking things like Aaliyah... XD

Still, I'd rather you get rid of the boyfriend and hook her up with the Devil! *crazy fun*

I'm loving Aiden more and more- cute, funny and charming. :D

Cool! I love the start right away... very interesting! ;)

And I also read your A/N... I like it that I can picture Aiden clearly- since you said he looks like the red-head dude from A/C (that's Reno, by the way) :D

I also like it how their names have meanings! Awesome! (I like using names with meanings, too- most of the time.) ;D