Reviews for Sinful Affections
LadyBookworm13 chapter 5 . 8/16/2007
Whee~ Another amazing chapter!

Cynically yours,

Artemis
LadyBookworm13 chapter 4 . 8/16/2007
Okay, if you have never seen V for Vendetta, watch it now, and you will see how amused I was when I read that question and answer bit! That was great! I like Jessy too! I like how your writing is rather smooth, its easy to read. Devil man is HOT! Okay, next chapter!

Cynically yours,

Artemis
LadyBookworm13 chapter 3 . 8/16/2007
I LOVE Vance! He's a very...different character, not the normal bishie- I like it! Amazing once again! Moving on to the next!

Cynically yours,

Artemis
LadyBookworm13 chapter 2 . 8/16/2007
Whe~ SEXY DEMON MAN! Ehem, sorry...; I like the devil! Mwahaha, I've gone over to the dark side! Hehehe, I love it! I don't see too many grammar errors, thank Martel for Microsoft Word and spell check...my stuff would be terrible. . I did see a bit of word repetition, not too much, but a couple. Bravissimi! I continue reading!

Cynically yours,

Artemis
LadyBookworm13 chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
Hehehe, I like it! Very, very ingenious idea, I must say! Vampires are more my thing, and/or werewolves, but demons are just as hot, litterally in some cases. Aiden...hmm...RENO! Hahaha, that gave me a laugh. I like your style, and thus, I head onto the next chapter! You're going to get a review for every chapter from me! D All in all nice first chapter!

Cynically yours,

Artemis
SilentWhisperWolf chapter 14 . 8/4/2007
oh! I wonder how the next chapter will play out? hope you update again soon! love the story.
reviewer chapter 14 . 7/29/2007
fave character: vance/lucifer. he's just so 'cool.' so calm and collected, doesn't get threatened by anyone... he is the MAN. i mean... he is the DEVIL. yeah!

i love this... aaliyah getting him to feel emotions and such. it's so cute when he displays acts of caring for her.
A.A-H.L chapter 14 . 7/27/2007
again another wonderful chapter. the last part, the last line, made me feel a little teary, because she had this (at the moment cause she's all headached and stuff) dull longing for him to just say I love you and he never did. cant wait!
chic rebel chapter 14 . 7/24/2007
update update!
Faith Adeline chapter 14 . 7/23/2007
ah, I love this story. personally, I always loved vance. simply because I love me some bad boys, haha. and he's like, number one seeing as how he's lucifer ha. Anyways, keep up the good work! Cannot wait for more!

Faith
Sam chapter 14 . 7/22/2007
I'm now baffle as to how Vance and Aaliyah's relationship will work. That's like contrasting too extremes unless of course there is a shade of gray somewhere. Ajax did bring out some good points.

My favorite characters are still the same it hasn't change but this time I want to include Belle in that list too. Thanks for updating.
starburst19 chapter 14 . 7/21/2007
i love your story update soon
violet-eyez chapter 14 . 7/19/2007
so will she just end up being heartbroken
awaiting.rain chapter 14 . 7/18/2007
dang. i dont know what i would do if i were her.

how many chapters left do you think?
awaiting.rain chapter 10 . 7/18/2007
getting more supernatural-y? nice.

aw. i was hoping she could stay friends with william after they broke up.

but anyways, thanks for reviewing my story. i think i'm just gonna leave it as a one shot. or add another chapter from the guys pov. i dont know if i want it to become a happily ever after though.

and yeah, the whole birthday thing was a bit blech.

well good luck with your friend.
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