Reviews for Sinful Affections
awaiting.rain chapter 7 . 7/18/2007
people didnt like vance?

i liked him right from the start.
awaiting.rain chapter 5 . 7/18/2007
this is absolutely nothing like the devil wears prada.
Ms.Romantic chapter 14 . 7/18/2007
volopurus chapter 14 . 7/18/2007
This chapter was a lot more disjointed than you usually are in writing. It was very good, don't get me wrong, but I could tell that you struggled with the topics that you wanted to introduce right now.
ski bird chapter 14 . 7/18/2007
ok good but well isn't lucifer falling kinda fast? i mean there are other girls out there like her...

and on the first section or whatever i think u used th epronoun she a lot so it was kinda hard to tell if u were talking about belle or aaliyah.

update soon ;)
Lyss chapter 14 . 7/17/2007
The ending just makes you go 'Aw!'
LilionTheUrbanFairy chapter 14 . 7/17/2007
Ajax would be my favorite I like him a lot I think he is hones and very very honest about what he think, vance of course is also a very good character but pooka is priceless I love that cat, even if we didn't see much of him latley, Alalliyah father made me wonder what if the would be gran children thats a creepy tought! any way loving the chappter totally! a superb job!
aussiegrl5070 chapter 14 . 7/17/2007
Wow, this is one of my favorite chapters yet. I love the Ajax scene. He plays the goodguy and badguy at the same time. I hope Aiden doesn't hurt him too bad. I sensing that he does in fact have a small problem with Aiden seeing lots of other people.

Vance, is great, but can be annoying. However that's one of the reasons I love his character. He's written so well and I can even see some emotion coming through in him, :)

Keep up the amazing work and update soon please.
pop-yur-fcukn-collar chapter 14 . 7/16/2007
Ajax's a bit of an asshole. I'm happy she slapped him. Lol.

Aw, Vance cares about her.

Update sooN!
Freakage chapter 14 . 7/16/2007
Wonderful! Poor everyone, so stuck in their ways. Thanks for updating!
OoohLookACat chapter 14 . 7/16/2007

that end part is so sweet



is quite adorble

and ajax

the guy knows stuff

he's like...

someone dark and mysterious and hot

but...really wise

and hard to read.

oh well haha

can't wait for the next one

i can't get enough of this story hahaha

SuperCUTEJensen chapter 14 . 7/16/2007
great chapter i've just read your whole story and I love it...I cant wait to see what happens next..hope you update soon
Misguided-Soul chapter 14 . 7/16/2007
Hey CK Shorty! Great 14th chapter! Was wondering where Vance was during the beginning of the chapter, but he showed up near the end! Yay! I was wondering if Aaliyah will ever know what happened between Will and the "mysterious" girl, because it seems like she knows what happened, but ignored it

Anyways, update soon!

(PS: An Ajax & Aiden one-shot is not a bad idea lol.)

[11:40pm in ON,Canada]
Lightning Storm chapter 14 . 7/16/2007
aw, the Devil has a heart. How sweet lol

Nice chapter. I'm lovin the story still...

update soon
Harley Quinn Davidson chapter 14 . 7/16/2007
Great job I enjoy your stories like no other. I can not wait to see if she can tame the beast that is lucifer. Does pooka the hidden demon cat hav a bigger role? Continue to write
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