lol wow, just little old me, guessed that?

lets not do belle/aiden... its really annoying when an authors pairs EVERYONE off with each other. you dont have THAT many characters in your story so I just think it'd be a waste of time... but if it would happen i would certainly enjoy it!

yay jessy can walk! if there's anyone who deserves somebody special in their life its him. im so happy for him.

i cant wait to see what happens when aaliyah finds out that vance is lucifer. i do think u still need to build more of a connection between vance and aaliyah if u plan on having them be together at the end of the story.

i can't wait to find out what happens next in the story! and no your chapter doesn't feel rushed. i think that the devil should just let her go, if she does happen to want to.

Oh man... I love it. It didn't seem at all cramped or rushed to me.

Update again soon

Hehe interesting x) fun fun!

AH! I loved it.

OMG, I'm not trying to brag or anything like that, but I had a feeling you would do something like that and, well, I sort of thought it would be like that one movie "Bedazzled" you know with Brendan Frazier? And it would be some sort of selfless wish that would get her out of the deal or something, if you have no idea what I'm talking about, you should watch the movie, IT'S AWESOME! Anyways, even though i'm christian and I think God is everything and the devil, you know sucks and all, but I sort of want Aaliyah to end up with Vance/Lucifer.

~Amanda~

P.S. Whew that was long, sorry! LOL!

Keep going! This is great! But did Vance really understand that she was hurt with the whole William thing? And will he tell her about him being...Him?

yeahyuuh. just found this story today, came back because i was bored, and then my jaw dropped. woo, you updated! god, i was cackling like, for five minutes before i calmed my ass down and read your chapter. awwh, i feel bad for Will though. it wasn't his fault! was this an easier way to make her break up with Will without involving her feelings, or something? gah. and then when Jessy got his ability to walk again. . . i liked the way you laced it in with what Vance said in the earlier chapters. (:

cute.

well. . . update soon again? haha. i loved it, dahlin.

xoxluurve

Wow. A whole bunch of stuff!

Well, I'm glad she broke it off of him- but that wasn't really fair, was it? 'Cause she's LUST, and man, if I were Aaliyah I'd feel so self-conscious and unworthy, you know? But still, it seems like Aaliyah is figuring out that Vance isn't human, about time!

You still answer my question! Happy or sad ending? And is it possible for Vance to change her? Lmao, I doubt she'd want to change willingly. But anyway, Belle and Aiden, that'd be sweet! Aiden, I love that name. His story was so sad! _ And he was a little boy too, and his mom...well, she sounds like a whore, no offense. _ I think his mom deserved to die like that.

So, I'm guessing now Vance will get his wish to have her- what then? I mean, will he just leave her? Aiden mentioned that it was possible for a demon to love- but Vance is Lucifer and hah...maybe all the talks of Religion speaking about how the devil cannot love has gotten to our heads, but will he actually love her? And wow, he saved and defended her! All for ONE girl, a HUMAN girl at the too! Keep writing!

Out-Spoken-Runaway

oo, very interesting. (:

i cannot wait for the next chapter.

hm. . . will they fall in love? are they even allowed to be together? agh, i have a feeling that she will leave him -.- since, you know, he's evil and all. ha.

update soon.

xoxluurve

ooh. interesting.

lust! one of the 7 deadly sins ;)

is that a hint?

:O

haha.

well i hope you update soon :D

or Sweet Music.

that'd be good too :)

it's funny how people in real life actually have those kind of secrets, so that was cool/interesting to read and of course lucifer would know their sins. i see this story on alot of faverite lists, so i thought i would check it out and im still loving it.

loving it already

Dude update ASAP! Can't wait to read more! This is like the #1 story i look to for updates.

Oh no if Aaliyah only knew what kind of a deal she's really making and with a devil too. I like Belle, haha, she makes me laugh and she'll tell Aaliyah the truth too. I can't wait until Belle and Aiden meet. Isn't Vance going to get mad that the vampires and werewolves are leaving evidence behind or that they're not cleaning up their mess? Vance is being very bad. Thanks for updating.