I love the ending and the whole story. I've really liked the way you've portrayed Vance. He isn't the overly sweet guy or the crude and mean guy just because he is the devil. I think Vance proved the way he feels about Aaliyah way louder than saying he loves her. I thought the story had a good pace. It is just the last couple of chapters that made things a bit rushed. I thought it was extremely sweet when Vance asked Aaliyah if the kitten made her happy. I liked that Aaliyah and her mother will never get along but I'm sad that she and Belle are not as close anymore. Cole has the coolest powers for a kid, haha. I wanted more but I am pleased by what you wrote for us so thank you for finishing this story.

Hey Chey, did you miss my reviews, haha, joking. Well, I've missed reading your stories due to school and stuff. Anyway, I can't believe it! Belle and Aiden hooked up, haha. I feel bad for Jessy and Pooka left Aalyiah. Holy crap, did Lucifer just said, "I'm sorry." I find it awesome how you can convey how difficult it is for Vance to be sensitive or to show how much he truly loves and care for Aaliyah. I doubt if he'll ever say he loves Aaliyah though because he is the devil. Good chapter. Thanks for updating.

How about a sequel featuring Cole?

what a great story and a super sweet ending to go with it. )

I loved it. Though i do agree with you. It did seem a littl rushed at the end. But it was still a good ending. I really liked the story. and you could make a sequal to it, cuz how you ended it. which of course you already knew that lol. but yes, it was a very good story. i liked it alot. it made me happy. lol. very very good story. keep up the good writing. Write on!

yay! cole sounds so cute. Great story.

So this one finally came to an end, (sniff, sniff). Kinda funny how Lucifer turned out to be a softie after all. Great ending!

had to putit like this because I can only put one review, but reading the end a second time I must say that I like how every one in her life is not longer there her mom (not that we will miss her), her cat, her friend, all because of him but not in a to bad way, did u do it on purpose?

I loved this story! I thought it was original, quirky and very interesting.

Anyway, I thought I'd leave a note saying that if you ever do a spin off or sequal of some sort I'd love to see Lucifer with a baby girl. I think it would be so cute and oh so gorgeous... Ahh, the possibilities.

Anyway, it was a wonderful story. Your characters were great - I loved Aiden! I loved how you left it open ended - you could write the story forever and to end everything closed and happy wouldn't really suit the story. I mean, you really need to suspend reality when reading this (well, to a certain extent) which means there are thousands of alternatives.

Anyway, thanks for the great read!

Jen.

loved every bit of this story. thank you! you're an amazing writer.

just wanted to let you know that i enjoyed this story.

:D

I like that ending! Lol, she should end up immortal! 'Cause I don't think she should die haha! But, he never DID say he loved her, but y'know, I guess he shows it. Man of few words eh? Lol, oh well. Good ending, Keep writing!

Out-Spoken-Runaway

great ending...sad to see it end but I enjoyed every single update, brilliant story..

Aw

favorite story right here. cause even in the end. he couldn't say i love you straight out. its not overly cliche'd like all the other demon/human couple thing. even better than that.