I loved this! sorry I didnt review for the previous chapters but i totally love this fic! please tell me you're doing a sequel...

i reallyreally want to see what happens to them a few years later or something!

i wont be able to sleep without knowing that they werent married!

haha!

Great story! You definitely kept me hooked from the beginning to the end. :) And I will certainly be adding it to my favorite stories list.

Yes, the epilogue part seemed somewhat rushed, but that is generally the nature of epilogues. Maybe it'll help to specify that it was 4 years later?

Again, overall, superb story. I hope you keep writing and look forward to any future stories you write.

I loved the end it wasnt to rushed I really liked it! and yeah sure she figured that had been vance who send that woman but it wasn't important because she had already made the decition to leavea any way but in all a perfect endig not every question is to be answerd! wonderful job really

wonderful ending, I for one, thought it was very good. I liked that they had a child, and that they're happy. And no, it didn't seem rushed to me. Although, I would maybe put like, 4 years later, or whatever at the top. Just so readers aren't confused. Keep it up, this was a great story! I can't wait to see what else you come up with :)

Faith

Also, I'm a little sad to see there isn't a sequel, but I think this was a good stand alone story.

I loved Cole. He seems so adorable! Four year olds talk heaps. When my cousin was four I couldn't get her to shut up. And she was at the stage where she stuck her rude finger up at people and swore and wet them with hoses ... I hate to think that she learnt that from me.

Haha. Vance and the kitten. That was so cute of him! I love kittens and puppies. I find it hard to walk away from the pet shop when I see one.

I really liked the ending. Especially Cole - he was to cool. Lol.

GREAT ENDING. Fast...

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You said in the first part with Cole that he had brown hair. In the bath scene you said ink-black. (fixer?)

i liked it!

i actually thought Cole was a better name for the devil when i started reading it. the irony!

oh i loved it

but i dont think it was that rushed

perhaps cause you wrote it

you feel you rushed it

but i think it was fine :)

i loved it though

- all of it.

this story was so good

it's on my favourites :)

i'm sad to see it go

but at least it was a good ending

izzie

Love the ending. although it was a bit rushed, especially when Cole was introduced. BUT, nevertheless, I absolutely LOVE this story! Can't wait to read your next project. :D SEe ya!

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I was shocked by this ending, everything happened so fast. But I did like this story. Good job.

wonderful wonderful story!

a one shot of lucifer and aaliyah would be so rad.

oh...or maybe an older cole? hes so cute.

'so, this chap was going to be longer...but...yeah. ? i was having a ton of editing problems with this chapter like you wouldn’t believe. i copied and pasted a bunch of stuff...and arg! it shows up funny and i get pissed, and then once, everything was italic and i had to go through (after returning the font to normal) and italic thoughts and some words. THEN (lol...), the middle (later on, also some of the ending) of this chapter was accidentally deleted and i pushed ‘save’ too fast...so...i’m sure you can imagine my rage. blah.'

sheesh woman or at least I think ur a woman/ girl whatever, if your not... sorry :$ lol ok well great so far! very interesting plot. It just grabs you. :) And even though were dealing with the supernatural here, you can believe that these charaters exist. if that makes sense... :S Can't wait till you update!

love the story so far.. you sure have a huge imagination, but in my book that's a great thing. Vance sounds hot, even if he is the devil, and Aaliyah sounds sweet yet complex. lol if that makes any sense at all. okay I'm going to continue reading now. :)

okay so I plan on reading the whole story, but I just wanted to let you know, that the first chapter is awesome. Also that the story sounds very cool and original. ok let me get back to the story, lol.

This is an amazing story! The plot is original and it keeps me hooked, just like your other stories. Update soon!