Reviews for Room
bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 9/22/2006
Great imagry and emotion. It flows nicely too. Great work and definatey keep writing.
Striped Candycane chapter 1 . 9/22/2006
Nice...you managed to rhyme with out sounding forced, something I can never do. The discriptions also bring interesting images to the reader's mind. Good work!