Reviews for Jump
Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
Very nice poem. Short yet beautiful. Though I feel this should be written out to a story. It'd make everything even more wonderful! Amazing, keep it up .
Dr. Self Destruct chapter 1 . 9/25/2006
Ack! This makes me nervous just reading it, and I hope that whoever is thinking this decides not to jump.

Very nice. )
istotherecan chapter 1 . 9/25/2006
I really liked it. It was emotionally powerful in the way that it was kept short, like little jabs at your mind, Great poem!
bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 9/24/2006
This is very well written. You captured a moment in time wonderfully. Great work.
K E Douglas chapter 1 . 9/23/2006
sometimes I wonder how you manage to get inside my head this way... it's phenomenal how you write so simply and elegantly and manage to send shivers down my spine. Keep writing
realityescapesher chapter 1 . 9/22/2006
jump, indeed. even though it's tough... we can't hang on to denial forever. very thought-provoking even though it seems so simple. ::applause::