|Reviews for Jump|
| Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
Very nice poem. Short yet beautiful. Though I feel this should be written out to a story. It'd make everything even more wonderful! Amazing, keep it up .
| Dr. Self Destruct chapter 1 . 9/25/2006
Ack! This makes me nervous just reading it, and I hope that whoever is thinking this decides not to jump.
Very nice. )
| istotherecan chapter 1 . 9/25/2006
I really liked it. It was emotionally powerful in the way that it was kept short, like little jabs at your mind, Great poem!
| bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 9/24/2006
This is very well written. You captured a moment in time wonderfully. Great work.
| K E Douglas chapter 1 . 9/23/2006
sometimes I wonder how you manage to get inside my head this way... it's phenomenal how you write so simply and elegantly and manage to send shivers down my spine. Keep writing
| realityescapesher chapter 1 . 9/22/2006
jump, indeed. even though it's tough... we can't hang on to denial forever. very thought-provoking even though it seems so simple. ::applause::