Ouch. Good. The stream-of-conciousness works perfectly here.

One thing I love about fictionpress - getting to hear you more! I like this, though. And I know where you're coming from.

Much love...TinuvielDork

This sounds like me and my siblings, great job

VERY good, I know so many people in the world can relate to this. I've felt like it a few times, though I'm the oldest in my family. I'm sure my sibling feels like that sometimes too. You picked a great topic, and you portrayed it well. Great job!