Reviews for Competition
TinuvielDork chapter 1 . 11/2/2006
Ouch. Good. The stream-of-conciousness works perfectly here.

One thing I love about fictionpress - getting to hear you more! I like this, though. And I know where you're coming from.

Much love...TinuvielDork
BlueInk77 chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
This sounds like me and my siblings, great job
An-Author-At-Heart chapter 1 . 9/22/2006
VERY good, I know so many people in the world can relate to this. I've felt like it a few times, though I'm the oldest in my family. I'm sure my sibling feels like that sometimes too. You picked a great topic, and you portrayed it well. Great job!