Reviews for Rolling Thunder
realityescapesher chapter 1 . 10/30/2006
LOVE the last line. also the imagery is gorgeous. i also loved how you broke up lines in the beginning "A trill on a flute, held under indefinite fermata? Or/is it" i love how it brings pause to the reader.

-aly
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/25/2006
This is very flirtatious and cunning. I loved that last line. What I like best about this is that you kept the same tune throughout - you weren’t arguing or shifting - you were just displaying glimpses: “Like a Spanish ‘r’, smooth stacatto” and “The water rolled effortlessly off the crackling land.” all of these delightful images that make up the conscience mind. Very lovely. Sorry that it took so long for me to review this, school started last week and I’ve been swamped. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.
toxic-noodle725 chapter 1 . 9/22/2006
yaay! im the first reviewer! thanx for the review. yea those kind of doubts(u had w/ur boyfriend) are what kills me from trusting a person fully. anyway back to business. why does thunder roll? i liked it. it had a playful rhythm that i absolutely loved. keep it up!