|Reviews for Can't Help But Smile|
| Aimers chapter 1 . 9/22/2006
I liked the ending, but I have issues with the rest of this. First off, you should really run grammar-check on this work. Secondly, instead of using dividers, try putting the "flashbacks" in context. This way, it'll flow better.
The last sentence, however, is purely delicious. Keep on writing! )