|Reviews for Million Dollar Baby|
| Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 9/29/2006
This is a wonderful piece. My only real crit is that I think the very last line could be left off and it would make the ending stronger. My favorite part is this:
Everything that would have been/is someplace on another road,/back before the turn where they left you,/my unintended sacrifice
| BearHeart chapter 1 . 9/22/2006
What a beautiful story! Thank you. I wish I could say I didn't understand some of your references! Seriously, though, well written. "Could any heart bear...as still as yours?" So terribly sad. "The needle's point fulcrum of my life is before I was born." So very, very true.
| wildwolffree17 chapter 1 . 9/22/2006
Oh... this is so heartbreaking...
So, so good, in a torturous kind of way.