|Reviews for Random Mumblings of an Anonymous Blogger|
| in a jar pk chapter 4 . 10/16/2007
i really like your style. ]
| Tell Me Tall Tales chapter 11 . 4/4/2007
This is cool. I liked it :).
| Tell Me Tall Tales chapter 9 . 4/4/2007
This is absolutely awesome. Best lines, in my opinion:
"Fast like the water rushing up to meet the sky,
a tsunami of sound that we like to call jazz."
This is going on my favorites list, and so are you :D
| polka dots and addictions chapter 7 . 4/2/2007
yer, interesting formatting here. i think it separated the bits well, & the feelnigs come across cleary.
| polka dots and addictions chapter 6 . 4/2/2007
the last bit really ends the poem with a flair. aww.
| polka dots and addictions chapter 5 . 4/2/2007
the last verse is wonderfully painful (if that makes sense) & i love the 'And either way,/
somebody's gonna get hurt.' bit. nicely written.
| polka dots and addictions chapter 4 . 4/2/2007
nice verse structure, 3rd stanza is my fave. im really enjoying this collection- theyre all like little diamonds ]
| polka dots and addictions chapter 3 . 4/2/2007
i was going to pick out my favourite bits but then i realsid i had copied pretty much the whole poem...
| polka dots and addictions chapter 2 . 4/2/2007
nice use of capitals, & i love the beginning couple of lines. nice work D ~Bex xx
| polka dots and addictions chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
i really like this- nice theme & well written.
| Travis C. Eckert chapter 8 . 2/16/2007
Great poem of love.
| Travis C. Eckert chapter 7 . 2/15/2007
Wow, this is really good. I can't understand how you came up with this. Seems true, and good for "posers" to read.
| Travis C. Eckert chapter 6 . 2/15/2007
Wow, just like silk this is, so fine.
| Travis C. Eckert chapter 5 . 2/15/2007
Wow, of course if that happened that person would move on by then. But good job.
| Senkai Ninja chapter 12 . 1/12/2007
Awesome poem. I know how that feels too well.