Reviews for Until Somebody Gets a Concussion
non.graceful chapter 3 . 5/3/2011
Damn sweet
non.graceful chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
AngelReader chapter 3 . 2/10/2009
aw omg i LOVE the last paragraph P

it's so sweet

but why is she mad though? lol

no's still an awesome story LOVE IT ]
A.M. Dawson chapter 3 . 9/15/2008
awwe! It's so cute!

The only thing is there's some sentences that need commas etc.

But so cute!

I'm a mushy pile right now.

Limecrisis chapter 3 . 8/7/2008
o shoot... i never actually finished the story... wow that was a lot better then i thought O_O i read the first two chapters and i kind of missed the 3rd one O_O DANG this is good too D
Me.again and again chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
oo dang this was a while back O_O dang you started early no wonder youre so good D
MK16 chapter 3 . 8/21/2007

It was totally awsome XD very well written and I absolutely adored the story plot ]

So well done! great job and keep it up!]

ccaltuna chapter 3 . 4/7/2007
Cute. Sorry, I'm exhausted and therefore can't leave a coherent review, so...very cool.
ConsistentlyxInconsistent chapter 3 . 2/22/2007
Dude that ending was definetly good enough. It was wicked sweet!
ThePiracyOfHearts chapter 3 . 2/10/2007
this just gave me the worst case of

butterflies and weak knees. good job.

Ruh chapter 2 . 1/31/2007
u should update soon, there needs to be an end
Firaa the Fallen Guardian chapter 2 . 1/8/2007
I love your main characters. They aren't those perfect little things you see all the time. I love this story, and I'm sad to see that it's just a short story. So much potential! Keep writing.
EeeNAce chapter 2 . 11/26/2006
Wonderful. I love your descriptive narrations. Beautifully done.
EeeNAce chapter 1 . 11/26/2006
Oh wow, this is really well written. I'm looking forward to reading the next.
Soul Tea chapter 2 . 10/7/2006
M-azing.I can't to find out what happens soin and keep up the good work!
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