Next chapter please,,

This is really good and different from everything that I have read. I am glad I found this story. Great job.

I have to say that I really enjoy this. I hate seeing Nicole's life, seeing a horrible glimpse of her hard life. I love that DeLuca keeps trying to push into her life, showing how much he cares. Gosh, DeLuca sounds amazing, not perfect but that is just a human flaw. This is such a great story. I can't wait to read the sequel. Capelli is an a**!

Wow this story is getting really good. I love the way you are so intouch with you're characters and there attitudes! Sorry i couldn't review earlier i was just so into you're story i couldn't stop :c ) i can't wait till i get to the end!

By the way... ya know when you said 'if you don't like the story then don't read and don't bother sending reviews?' I totllyay know what you are talking about, i'm on fanfition all the time and alost all my stories have bad comments! It's like get a life! There's always somthing bad to say about my stuff i guess :c P Anyway aweosme sotry and when im done i totally want to read Love me you Asshole! I can't wait :c P

bye! P.S sorry about speeling mistakes ... i can't spell for shit :c P l8ter

I can't wait to read the sequel but I see it hasn't been updated in a while, so please update. I really wanna know how it turns out.

AMAZING! i love it.. plz plz plz write more?

fantastic!

I liked how you kept it humorous, yet angsty at the same time.

You had a few grammar errors here and there, plus various other minor problems. But there wasn't anything /too/ distracting.

I'd like to read the sequel, but it doesn't look as if you update it. Leaving Mike like that? What a bad move. I liked him - he was really trying. Nicole was pretty frustrating at times, but I totally understand why she was.

I just wish it had had more closure to the story. I mean, sure, you planned a sequel, but I mean, you left like EVERY loose end open :P.

Anyways, overall, nice job :). I hope you suddenly decide to update the sequel x).

it was really really good. i like the 'delucaphobia', has a nice ring to it. lol. 'you're in my light' is way overused but still funny. and other things. like. 'do you always think of making out?' 'no'... 'yes'. lol. and other stuff. i just can't remember it. OHH. the i hate you! no, i love you. haha. lurved it. can't wait to read the sequel.

A different ending than what I expected. But very good story.

Wow...well..that was rash I guess...no high school degree no good job/no money/no food/ no shelter, no DeLuca means constant heartache, but a strange new place means freedom and rebirth, but always with secrets...Mike should have along too. Sad and actually quite funny...hmm.

This story was really good and interesting. I hope the sequel turns out great.

i likr your story, but i feel like im reading the abbrieviated version... if that makes sense. its all good but it could all be fleshed out.

Wow, amazing story. I sat down and read it straight through. I really love it - you portray everything so beautifully. can't wait to read the sequel - hopefully w/ a happy ending. keep writing!

ow ow! XD