Reviews for spill
Femme de Dieu chapter 1 . 9/25/2006
And thank you for the additional R&R! I like the idea of this poem a lot. To talk of memories as something we rip open, gut and then seal shut was great. I think you and I just have different, not better or worse, just different tastes in rhyming/not rhyming, etcetera...and that's okay. For instance, in this poem, I would've changed the last line to read "and wring out the aftertaste" or simply, "and wring the aftertaste." Because in my ear it would flow better with the word "faith" in the stanza above. But that's just me. I'm not suggesting you change it by any means...just as you graciously did not suggest that to me either. ) Various styles make life interesting!Truly, Tourterelle
Sir Scott chapter 1 . 9/24/2006
Nice poem.

Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, ~SirScott~