Reviews for Jumping the Gun
the.pink.life chapter 1 . 9/26/2006
Wow, this is pretty bizarre. Your imagery is amazing, though. You create such strange images here, and I'm not quite sure what to think of this, but I love the idea of whispering in someone's mouth, and the sack of vomit visual, as disgusting as it is, certainly brings a picture to my mind. Keep writing! :)