Reviews for Sweet Memory
Fan Fan chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
A beautiful you,

Dazzling under the moonlight glow.

I feel captured,

Hands tied in fencing my drum solo heart.

What were you thinking,

When you looked down with that smile?

How did you feel,

As I waltzed you around the grand palace floor?

Did you really know how much I meant it,

When I whispered "Sweet dreams lovely."?


Poem inspired by yours, thank you :)
Louise chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
This poem has some really beautiful imagery. I especially like the first line and the last two of the second stanza. It gives it a very dreamlike quality which enhances the shy/romantic atmosphere of the poem. Its got quite a young feel to it, a kind of first love element. Really enjoyed reading it.
Amethyst Eyed Cynical One chapter 1 . 11/10/2006
thats gorgeus it.
Lady DreamWriter chapter 1 . 10/5/2006
Wow, a great poem, I'm happy for your sister and I hope she is very happy. If you haven't showed her this, you should.
Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 9/30/2006
Beautiful Alex, just beautiful. Must've been a cool experience for your sister _

Much love, Rosanna.

- how've you been babe? -
arcane devices chapter 1 . 9/25/2006
Nice job with the imagery, and quite thematic. I hope to see you on your next update. - ADD-san
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 9/24/2006
This is beautifully done. I love the emotions that are in this. I could see it all happening in my head.

Keep it up.

I hope that you put more poems up soon.
D. A. Emme chapter 1 . 9/24/2006