Reviews for Hiding
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/28/2007
Found out what? 8O

I love the mystery.
KingdomRain chapter 1 . 10/19/2006
i like the last two lines. i dont know how to explain but it adds a little mystery to it in a way. like who or what were they hidding from. anyways, i really like this.
rira-chan chapter 1 . 10/11/2006
this one had a great meaning in it. i liked this one very much. great job!

rira-chan
blue.eyes.can.be.deceiving chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
great poem. i loved writing.!Ashlyn!
bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 9/27/2006
Nice work, I this haiku. Definatley write more.
Basara chapter 1 . 9/26/2006
ouch...

nice...
Pandakun84 chapter 1 . 9/25/2006
Cool. I like this! Great job!
Ashelin chapter 1 . 9/24/2006
O, this makes me think of hidden feelings and I dunno, weird stuff. Great job! God bless.-Ashelin
S. K. Doyle chapter 1 . 9/24/2006
I don't quite see this as a poem, just a comment. It achieves what it is supposed to, but there isn't much poetic language involved. I know haikus don't usually do that, but haikus also dont have a concluding couplet seperate from the body.