Reviews for NineOneOne
average.snarker chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
It was a fairly bland poem actually, but it seems sincere. We could see the smoke from our classroom, most of us have permanent lung damage, even though we weren't in Manhattan. Were you there too? You seem like you might have been.

Cynically Yours,


The Furtive Oubliette

P.S. If I didn't think you were sincere about this, I would probably have been pretty mean to you .
AgtBauer24 chapter 1 . 12/5/2006
Hey, I think this is a nicely written poem. I still remember that day, it affected us all. I was in 6th grade then but old enough then to understand everything. My teacher said the class right next door could see the black smoke from the windows, but we couldn't see it in our windows. Anyways about the poem, what I liked most about it were the doublet rhyming. I thought that was nice and somewhat fitting (doublet rhyming and the two towers). Nice job.

I got your pm that you moved onto to this account. I hope you get success with this account. (I'm somewhat on writer's block, whatever I write, I'm unhappy with. lol.)