Reviews for Obsesionado
TheCabbageMan chapter 43 . 12/24/2015
well, i stayed up from 3am to 5am so i could read the whole thing. I definitely did not expect that ending and I highly double i'm going to be sleeping anytime soon
bob chapter 25 . 12/24/2015
i wonder if this is going to be one of those stories where the protagonist becomes an assassin or something
perfect.fluke chapter 42 . 4/7/2015
Been a while since you finished, but I thought I'd ask again. Any chance of you ever publishing this? I always come back to this story when I've run out things to read. I've probably read it 8-10 times in the past few years. it'd be great to have a hard copy of it. Also still hoping you're continuing the sequel!
A love affair chapter 2 . 10/31/2014
Confused... in this chapter you describe Julian as both "tall dark and yes quite handsome" and "tall white man with a mass of red hair". How can he be a red head and dark at the same time? Otherwise, intriguing plot so far :)
Amhj89 chapter 42 . 6/2/2014
I thought she has just turned 17 and that the guy was Julian's cousin?
flyfeatherfly chapter 43 . 12/11/2013
That was a great story :) I loved it from beginning to end, if not I liked it more and more as I read the chapters. I finished all 43 chapters in 3 hours.

Just a question to clear it up though, how old is Malcolm/Maxwell?
Marguerite Grimmett chapter 43 . 9/21/2013
Whoa... I hope Aurelio or whatever his name is doesn't go after Ariana (*wink* I like Ariana more than Alexandra).
Bmonti chapter 43 . 6/27/2013
oh god how could you just end it like that is there a squeal i will go check anyway but stilll no proper happy ending ahhhh and now the bad guy has my dads name ahhhhhh ok calming down now thanks for a great story i really enjoyed it all the emotions you really did the kidnapping great and even showed how difficult it is to get away.
minor correction you had said in a previous chapter that she had turned 17 but when she got her fake name the guy said she was 16 just felt like she needed to correct him or something also i would like to know how old is malcolm?
Bmonti chapter 39 . 6/27/2013
ahhhhhhhhh my dads name is Aurelio ahhhhhh i'll never be able to look at him the same way i was wondering where you got your names from you googled it or something? yay malcolm loves her but i love him
Bmonti chapter 24 . 6/27/2013
please tell me its only a dream
Bmonti chapter 23 . 6/27/2013
ahhhh Burrows i dont normaly like blonds but you could be a first hehehe ok now i'm pretending to talk to one of your characters i love your writing :)
Bmonti chapter 22 . 6/27/2013
ok i kinda have a crush on burrows now heheeh REVENGE hahaha she can learn form those guys and become an awsum assassin and then kill that son of a bitch sorry for the language again
Bmonti chapter 17 . 6/27/2013
ugg the strong alex should stay there!
Bmonti chapter 9 . 6/27/2013
Finally she said fuck you i was singing halaluuja praise the lord haha only down side was she was hit if she was smart she sould become a black widow you know like pretend that your inlove with him make him relax even if she has to sleep with him it be awful but still and then use your womanly charms to get what you want and when he least expect it kill him! hehe anyway kinda exited to see where this story is going
Bmonti chapter 7 . 6/27/2013
f word just keep on slipping from my lips i hope you like a lot of reviews since you will be getting a lot from me now evil cackle and some of them might not even make sense
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