Reviews for The Invisible Cord
J.D Braff chapter 1 . 9/26/2006
ha ha..

the awesome babbling lindy!

i got coughed at!

XD

...

yay?

and i must say that while i did like this one...

i loved your loving hate one!

cant wait to see how you did!

hmm, this one may have been quite englishy though...what with all the symbolism...

cord...seasons...

and it made me think alot about you...

shrug

it just seemed like such a you story.
Kylie1403 chapter 1 . 9/26/2006
o0o0o0 i likie!
p-y-a chapter 1 . 9/26/2006
woah.

how many words was it eventually? coz it was really good! put it in portfolio!

"Not even one whole year it seemed. Three hundred and sixty one days." really?

really close to home for some bits...

"Until one day, time stopped, and the seasons stopped, and life stopped.

And she was just her.

And he was just him." best bit.

didnt i review the other one? O

*goes to review*

YES! more LTOMM and WiRED! )
euphorix chapter 1 . 9/26/2006
hahhaa cool. i like it. its interesting. like the seasons...