Reviews for You're gone forever
lymli chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
it seems a song, I like the rhyme from the starting :) sweet n heartbroken,
Raaawr Ima Dinosaur chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
This was so sad :(

but it was written well
misery sister chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
hmm, this is a nice, strong poem. But maybe you should have read through this a bit more. Sometimes you miss out on the commas, and you sometimes write the words 'you're, you'll' into just 'you'.

Good poem though. It could have been stronger if all the easy mistakes could have been corrected.
Artemis Anderson chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
This is really beautifully written d:)
R. A. Faith chapter 1 . 9/27/2006
Wow. That girl is strong. I liked the ending. In most poems or stories or whatever, the guy would apoligize to the gal fifteen thousand times... and they'd live happily ever after. This is so much more realistic.
SavannahX chapter 1 . 9/26/2006
Hey! I like this poem, it's really good. This is SavannahX, by the way, I just changed my username. ;) Great job put up more poems soon!