Reviews for The Déjà Vu Café
shadowcat86 chapter 2 . 11/11/2006
Few minor spelling mistakes, but good.

You know how to get the reader's attention.

Humor will be back next chapter, right?

I look forward to Chapter 3.
LIPSTICKFLAMINGOSROCKROLL chapter 2 . 10/4/2006
HEY! don't blame your messed up grammer on moi! hmpf! hehe! put up the next one! i already know what happens but... STILL!
Spirit Tigress chapter 1 . 10/2/2006
Interesting first chapter! I wonder why it's called the deja vu cafe.
shadowcat86 chapter 1 . 9/29/2006
looks like it'll be good.

update soon!
The Melody of a Broken Heart chapter 1 . 9/27/2006
This story is pretty interesting, not much I can say here except proof-read your work before you post them. It will make your stories better and people will also review your stories better. As for me, I can't give a flame to anybody, but this wasn't a story that deserves to be flame, good overall story, I'll be waiting for future stories.

Saint- aka Prodigy
LIPSTICKFLAMINGOSROCKROLL chapter 1 . 9/27/2006
hehe! ILA RULEZ YOU ALL!
aka Providence chapter 1 . 9/26/2006
Hm... Interesting story. “I know, I mean look at all the people standing out there,” Nina pointed towards the door, “and none of them are coming in.”-nice line. The characters are very interesting.

If you get the chance, read my story: Angel's Halo 1: Devil's Rising, and drop a review. Much appreciated.

See ya!

aka Mitternacht