|Reviews for Twins|
| teppygirl chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
Really interesting story and I liked the ending, even if it was a bit ominous. It would be good if you could extend this, it's an interesting idea to explore.
| elisefey chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
Well that was intense. The opening scene was great for tension and action. I think that you could really build this into something longer, get into the mood and tone and stretch it just by slowing down a little and adding more sensory detail. It's got the potential for so many interesting probes into human relationships; I like the idea!
| Equilibrium chapter 1 . 12/13/2007
A beautiful oneshot. I really enjoyed it, especially the way you wrote such that there were no complete distinctions between the good and evil in human character. Your characters are very realistic and believable.
| Wolf's Night chapter 1 . 7/25/2007
Is this just a short story or are you adding more chapters because it sounds very interesting if you were tocontinue wih it! I was expecting the two young twins to be the evil-good pair but the husband haveing a twin was a nice twist.
| Captain Lucky chapter 1 . 5/11/2007
This was a very interesting story. It was intriguing (sp?) and your power with words is amazing. It gives me a lot to contemplate.
By the way, I wanted to thank you for reviewing. It was really encouraging to know that someone was actually reading my stuff.
| River Nightrunner chapter 1 . 5/9/2007
Nice. and thanks for the reviews. I wouldn't have changed crickets name at all except my friend made me and I'll try to watch my spelling. . yours is way better by the way!
P.S. My friend and editor, the one the name Cricket origanly belonged to, Her name is Mel.