Reviews for The Best Thing to Ever Happen to Me
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
this is definitly an intresting perspective from the person who was shut out from another person's heart and not the perspective of ther person who is actually shutting the other person out. Which is refreshing to read.
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 12/3/2006
Aww, that's cute. I like the bit about eating the key, because that's such a strange image. There isn't a lot of imagery in here, but like you said, you know it's not your best work. Keep writing! :)
Theory Of The 4th Dimension chapter 1 . 10/12/2006
Pretty...I like the dimension to this. Good job!
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 10/11/2006
¿Where are you that I can't seem to reach you?

¿Disappeared into that vastness of blue,

That in your look blends sky's distractions?

So far away your glance seems wandering,

To continents and regions yet unknown,

Past bridges, roads and all containments old,

Your soul seems to have fled unwittingly,

As if love was too boring or sedate,

To tender cultivate in fields nearby,

With passion given to plow's surety,

An Eden too constrained for you to live;

You seem to dream of yonder distances,—

And wilderness your need for strife and pain.

p.s. Where are you now?
Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 9/30/2006
Hey ya Simple plan! I like this one a lot, a friend of mine is like that. Very good job! _

Much love, Rosanna.
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 9/30/2006
oo i like the locked out and eaten the key bit! great job :) i like this one...but your right, its not you complete best.

ps-if you have time do you think you could R&R some of my new poems, i really would like at least one opinion thanks)
dancingintherain chapter 1 . 9/30/2006
so sweet! lol one of your best i think it comes out so real
Broken Petals chapter 1 . 9/28/2006
O, I like this one. I fave. And it makes sense to me, amazingly enough (cause I never get any poetry except my own ;)
Hidden Lies chapter 1 . 9/28/2006
This is really sweet and I like it a lot. Great work!
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 9/27/2006
Aw... omg! I totally understand and can completely relate. Yay! You posted! Great work, I think this is pretty good! _ Keep writing!

~Anna~ _