Reviews for Morning Melody
Ernest Bloom chapter 1 . 10/27/2008
oh yeah the last

couple lines really

make it work; i'm

a little puzzled abt

who's cooking the

bacon; maybe an

apartment complex?

you're really great at

making these tiny

scenes swell to

majestic proportions.
pocketfulofwhimsy chapter 1 . 9/28/2006
Oh wow this is so very sweet! I feel like this sometimes too. You really captured the essence of that particular emotion in this piece. Great work! )