Yes! Update. I can't wait for the end of this exciting story.

I've seen how much your writing has changed over the past couple of years and it's amazing. I thought you were a brilliant writer from the beginning, but you just keep getting better and better! It's crazy and I'm quite jealous.

Are you working on getting Eidolon (or anything else) published? I'm sure you are. I hope that you succeed, the published literary world would be very lucky to have you.

This story makes me cry.

Um, actually Medea didn't murder her husband.

Medea loved Jason, as in Jason the Argonaught, defied her country and her standing as a woman and helped Jason get the golden fleece. Jason is portrayed by most Greek writers as rather simple. Medea never married Jason. When they returned back home, Jason fell n love with another woman and in vengence Medea killed their two sons.

Great story by the way. )

So Cassie never loved Connor, nor was she sexually attracted to him? She, however, loves Charles.

This is so like _Hamlet_. And not only in the way Cassie is being haunted, like Hamlet was. I really enjor reading your writing, especially for this story because it is just amazingly original.

I thought was you asked in the FAQs was incredibly obviously, but some people just have trouble reading between the lines.

Poor Cassie. I have to feel sorry for her. She's just so screwed up.

It appears Charles is a power hungry man with an unhealthly obsession with his sister. It doesn't really look like his extremely overprotective to me. It seems like he wanted to keep Cassie's attention to himself and that he might want to sexaully abuse her or he already has.

The Barbies thing amuses me.

Nice job on character development.

Looking forward to more. Have a wonderful day.

~Twilight Starr~

This is an amazing story. with vivid discriptions and a girl we can sympthize it. Your flashbacks are understandable and doesn't get ensnared by the plot. Awesome writing!

(I don't think Medea kills Jason. She kills his fiance, his fiance's dad, her father, her brother, and her children, BUT I think she leaves Jason alive. (It doesn't detract from your story, just a note))

Keep Writing

- Arrow's Flight-

Can't wait for the next update.

I liked the plot at the bottom-it helped recap everything.

:]

are you going to put photos of the characters up on your site?

oh that made a lot more sense!

but i still don't get if connor is just an illusion from her mind,

or he is actually there in a way? and why did he sexually abuse her? does charles also like her in that way too? since you said they want something that the others had?

I felt like this chapter was short, but it's good and informative. The FAQ really helped me understand (even though I pretty much suspected/figured out most of it.)

(1) I understand that Cassie's guilt makes her see Connor, but isn't he in a way, another personality of Cassie's? And when will the others (if they do) discover that Cassie can see Connor?

(2) I think I may have asked this, and for that I am sorry, but does Charles merely love Cassie as a sister (very very deeply) or more? And do they share the same mother? (Connor and Cassie don't, right?)

Thanks for another excellently-written chapter. I'm happy to hear 2 chapters are left! (And sad at the same time).

wait they're married && are siblings. um incest anyone?

same father? wha-?

explaination would be nice.

"cross my heart and hope to die"

nice line. :)

dear old Cassie has a bit of a problem. she should run. fast.

why hasnt clara tried to get in touch with cassie?

You updated! That's good. And thank you for clearing up the whole incident. This chapter seemed like a filler. Though I do want to know: What is Charles's real intention? What's going to happen to Cassie? And does Connor represent the darker side of Cassie?