Reviews for Eidolon
zoule chapter 10 . 10/14/2007
I honestly can't understand why I like this story. It's creepy, and depressing, and has an unreliable narrator...BUT IT'S SO ADDICTING!
miss-life chapter 10 . 10/14/2007
This family is so perfectly fucked up and mental that they make a great story!

You should win an award or something because this is brilliant!

_Tina_
an-angelsmiles chapter 10 . 10/13/2007
Andrews' scarred me too. This story is so original. I love it
luv me like no other chapter 10 . 10/13/2007
ack, the tension and suspense. lol. I love it!
pinkrose0724 chapter 10 . 10/13/2007
still kind of confused,

but the wat you just write the story,

just makes me keep wantign to read,

eventhough i don't quite understand.. hah
anonymous chapter 10 . 10/13/2007
Actually, the story is quite clear, only I wish you'd show more of Charles's and Connor's past together. As for Cass, I love that she's finally aware of what's happening around her and she's becoming more independant. My prediction for the end: She'll end up killing Charles. But hey, I might be wrong.
for keeps chapter 10 . 10/13/2007
There are so many stories on fictionpress that I've just... lost interest in. I have an amazingly short attention span and most of the time after a month of no update I say, "Eh, wasn't that good anyway.".

The fact that this story has kept me gripped throughout says a lot about the quality! I liked this chapter, Connor is scary, but somehow I'm just as afraid of Charles. The ending was striking, and your wording of the entire thing was lovely and chilling. I love the way you write Cass, she's so completely insane, but she's still a believable character, and her train of thought doesn't seem unnatural.

Wonderful chapter, looking forward to more.
Faeya chapter 10 . 10/13/2007
Why's it so draining for you to write? All the angst.. the drama? Shrug, just curious, but... oh well. Just finish it; it's too delicious to wait too long for the ending.
Faeya chapter 7 . 10/13/2007
Oh my, this is a rather twisted story and intense too. It's all so ... messed up really. Charles, Connor, Connor, Charles.
personwithaccount chapter 10 . 10/13/2007
oh how i love this story. am i twisted?
Faeya chapter 6 . 10/13/2007
I'm finally catching up on the plotline, kind of abandoned it for a while. Anyways, Iseewhatyoudidthurr (with the title of the chapter). Totally intriguing, onto the next chapter.
CallMeCute chapter 10 . 10/13/2007
why is she no longer afriad of charles?
Rudos chapter 10 . 10/13/2007
Yay! Update!

Thank you for this intriguing story. Waiting for the last chapters.
Pretty Girls Make Graves chapter 10 . 10/13/2007
I really want Cassie to snap. Really, really snap. Oh, how unfair life has been to her.
Miss Retro chapter 10 . 10/13/2007
It's updated, finally!

Good chapter, can't wait to see what happens in the end. Quick update, please? :]
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