wow wow wow wow, you are completely right, I do like the ending, wow. Powerful! amazing, I think the ending is sweet in a sense. Story well told :)

That was twisted, but extremely good.

I can't believe it's over. Awesome job!

The ending confused me a little. So she stays alive?

I like the story so far :) But she sounds kinda childish... well I guess I'll find out why later. Nice job so far :D

Wow...this story is so beautiful and powerful. :) It must have been really difficult to write. I look forward to more stories like this one! :D

This was different from all of your other stories, but none the less-it was really good and spooky in a way.

Oh by the way, I would love it if you wrote Ella's story on FP. I think were all mature enough to handle it. :)

i liked the ending. i wasnt sure how there could be a happy ending to this story but i thought you did a good job coming as close to a real happy ending as possible- the only thing that bothered me was that poor mr. wyman had to be maligned that way.

I am continuously at a loss as to why you don't get stuff like this published. It's such a strong piece of writing. So creepy, too. This is the first time I have ever read a story that makes an insane character so real and believable. I don't know how you did it. I applaud you.

For some reason, to me, the last line was slightly reminiscent of end of Hemingway's "The Sun Also Rises." It's wistful, hopeful, and tragic. Anyway, this was a fantastic ending - appropriately insane and morbid. Kudos.

I was wondering how you were going to end this, but it was perfect, of course. Incredibly chilling, but perfect. Poor Wyman, being used like that. I was wondering if the truth would come out, but no, apparently not. Now I'm really curious about what happened to Clara.

(Oh, and in regards to your pending projects, I REALLY want to see Ella's story. She's amazing. Will you be able to post it anywhere else if you don't post it at FP?)

It was different, and you pulled it off nicely- you may not have liked it, but you wrote it well. I like that it shows how drastically the things that happened in the past affect the future.

You didn't enjoy writing this story?

I know it wasn't the easiest to write because the subject was something completely different and unique, but the fact that you didn't enjoy writing it makes me a bit sad.

Well at least I hope you're proud because this is one hell of a story!

GREAT JOB

_Tina_

Wow, that was one messed up plotline, but i absolutely loved every part of this. The ending between the characters was sorta expected though. You did a great job arriving to it, however and i loved how this chapter shows Cassandra seeing herself from another perspective on a newspaper. I can't wait for more stories from you!

Oh, Sweet Mother of Jesus...

And she never realized that she killed Charles... Wow.

A powerful ending, albeit a quiet one, but it suits the story perfectly. There was no way that this could have a happy ending, although Cassie deserved some happiness. Poor child, left to rot in a mental asylum, the very thing she was most afraid of... Awesome story!

The ending was so good! It reflected on Cassie's state of mind exactly how it should have. It showed exactly how torn she is from the real world, as in the real world Cassie is utterly doomed, but in her own mind, she's on the path to the happy ending. It provided your readers with a big of a double-ending, in a way.

I applaud you on making it all the way through this story, especially after how many times you've said that it was draining to write. It was a very good read with a very unique main character, and I think you've ended it perfectly, with the focus exactly where it should have been.

It was incredibly well done, and I'm going to stick with reading your stories (Fictionpress-wise) for a while, because you have such a tremendous grasp on your characters, and you write very well. I also didn't have to wallow through grammatical-errors to get to the end of this which was almost a miracle.

I'm a few chapters in to Trouble Starts With a Q which I'm loving so far. Expect a couple massive reviews for that (I don't want to bombard you with a separate 18 :P). I'm not sure if I love it as much as I've loved Eidolon yet, but then again, I'm being a bit unfair to compare the two.

I'm not disappointed to see this come to a close, if only because you've provided such a perfect ending. This is the only story I've successfully made it all the way through on this site. Thank you for writing it.

God, this story is just...

God.

I love this. It's a bit disturbing, but you can clearly see how Cassie thinks and feels, and from her point of view, Conner and Charles almost definitely exist in this chapter. Well, Conner seems to be there in almost every chapter, but yeah, you know what I mean.

I love the ending. It's not the best one, but then this is supposed to not be a fairy tale, is it? So it's perfectly suiting. And very thought-provoking, even though this one's pretty quiet.

Great job as always. :)

-fA