Reviews for Dance Along
kaorayen chapter 1 . 11/14/2006
I lovelovelove this one. I'm not one that really likes rhyming poems either (for some reason, maybe it's because I can't write them properly) so I especially like it. This line: And when the world/Is covered in a blanket of snow is the best because I love it when that happens. Loved it.
hellbentheretic chapter 1 . 10/5/2006
This is very "la la la," very cutesy. This does make me smile though and I like it when someone makes me smile. Like the last bit about being unaware of what sadness is like. This reminds of my days when I did quit a few drugs and just enjoyed life for what it was. Like sitting in the sun and just enjoying it. Talking with friends forever and wishing it wouldn't stop. This reminds me of that. This is really good when there is quite a bit out there that is rather depressing.


sarah1491 chapter 1 . 10/3/2006
Oh, I love it! I liker the short stanzas. Very nice. I like the:

"I dance along/ In utter oblivion/ Unaware of what/ Sadness is like"

lines. Nice job. :)

brokendreams21 chapter 1 . 9/28/2006
Yay prettiness! I love it! It's all flow-y and elegant. Awesome job!