|Reviews for The Conditions Project|
| What Happens Now chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
INteresting for a one shot, no glaring errors that I can think of. But two things one i think you should switch the formatting for author comments, and two alright you have got a B for this but now it seems like you should throw in some foreshadowing and see how it looks then
| The Ferrett chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
Sorry, tried but I'm not a short stories person - short chapters yes, stories no. I like meat with my bones - good luck on this one though.
| Mr.Satire chapter 4 . 12/18/2006
Wow! Creepy story! I read this at about 1:00 AM, and that kind of creeped me out. I did not expect the figures to be cat-like, though; I was expecting zombies. I really like two particular parts of this story.
1) I love when Kristen sings that song to herself! "Yo, tell me what ya want, what ya really really want... zigga-zig-ah!" Nice touch!
2) The ending line was great! "What happened? Is anybody out there? Is anybody... human?" Eerie!
| The Ferrett chapter 3 . 11/22/2006
this collection iks totally wacko... i like ::))
| Mr.Satire chapter 3 . 11/5/2006
Oops! I had still not added a review to this one. Well, thinking about it again, I should have listened to you and read it at night. However, it is was still a well-planned story. I liked the question of whether what happened was a dream or not (because of Randy's ceasing to stutter)!
Not wanting to steal a comment from a friend's review, my overall analysis will be that it is very 'creepily disturbing'!
| scotti chapter 3 . 10/26/2006
Ok, this was... and is... just disturblingly creepy. I suppose it fits right in with the current 'holiday' as you said. Creepy,I tell you...CREEPY! Scottie