Reviews for Holly the Poem: One Year On
Pissed Off Poet chapter 1 . 10/2/2006
very cool. Another great poem. You write very well and put a lot of meaning in to what you write. Great job
Dr. Colleen chapter 1 . 9/30/2006
Holly,This is almost like you're describing my own best friend...who also happens to be named Holly...but, I call her you for your review...I wrote Things I Take For Granted after speaking with a friend who is a soldier in the Canadian Forces. It was just me ruminating over how selfish I get sometimes...and so I passed it off as a poem. It's really only emotional ,Colleen
Max chapter 1 . 9/30/2006
I loved it!

I read the original one first. It brought back a lot of memories, harsh ones. You're right, it is amazing how much can change in a year :)

Keep thinking this way! I think this way now too, and it works. Don't let any of the 'old' people get in the way of your life. Your life already is wonderful without them. The 'new' people have opened up the real you, which we all love!

As for the poem, err I liked the way it flowed and you managed to rhyme without making it sound akward.
Panicking With Hesitation chapter 1 . 9/29/2006
wow. this is much happier then any self poem of me would be.

i like it.