Reviews for Twenty Things I Didn't Know About You
Kelsey Hurley chapter 12 . 4/21/2007
I don't care what you do, I WANT MY HAPPY ENDING!

Wait, no.

Make me marry Jeff Hardy.

And I'll be your best friend?

whodoyaTHINK chapter 9 . 1/7/2007


next chapter better have me in it!

I HATE EJ!:) yay.
Sajas82 chapter 8 . 1/6/2007
You should have gone with my ideas. Hahahahaha! Just kidding. Hurry up and write the next chapter! I get to find out her secret! You're all jealous.
guess chapter 6 . 12/24/2006
i've decided im not going to update People Change UNTIL you update THIS. AHH! i want LUKE! kay. kay. bye.


-kelsey & the cuzins:)
Meloy chapter 6 . 11/6/2006

really good chapter this. I like the whole scenes with shania and trip. very well done. I think that the part when Kay is crying into the phone is a bit difficult to imagine, might just be because of the stuttering in it, it makes it harder for me to read smoothly and imagine her saying. Really good job though.


ps, thank you for reviewing my story :)
Pablo the Incredible chapter 6 . 10/23/2006
chap.6 came out great sara, keep up the good authoring (is that even a word?) :P
Meloy chapter 5 . 10/9/2006
oh, they're agents? wicked. i like 'yeh, what's with the leather?' lol. brill. do you think you could review my story? I'll keep checking back here for updates... cool story. :)-meloy
Meloy chapter 4 . 10/9/2006
ahh! what's shania up to with that leather? blood on the wall? ek! love this story.-meloy
Meloy chapter 3 . 10/9/2006
wait... which one are you? this is really good. I like the characters. very interesting. poor shania! that jerk coming in and spoilling all her fun! keep writing! i keep reading. :)
Meloy chapter 2 . 10/9/2006
i like this chapter too! i like how they're just standing around and thinking about how the other people look now. very cool. The only problem I think is you need to express their emotions more than just them talking, in the last chapter they were very emotional but in this one they seem to have lost them! lol. very very good.-meloy
Meloy chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
cool, I like it a lot. :) the only problems I can really see is in the end she says accenctuates 'every hip' which sounds a bit odd considering you only have two, you might just want to say 'her hips'. I really like it though, the characters are very nice. I think that the kid is well written, I like how you say she uses her tallents mainly for the forces of evil. Very funny. like me when i was little. lol. Well done! I will read the other chapters too.-Meloy
Captain Kelsey chapter 5 . 10/8/2006
the agent thing is a bit...erm, other than that, its WIICKEDD good:]
Sarah chapter 5 . 10/7/2006
Wicked GOOD!

YOu didn't really ruin it for me when you said those random words. You have got to keep writing this.

What's up with the whole Agent thing?
colorful chapter 4 . 10/7/2006
Creepy! Update soon.


very creepy. I'm sorta confsued, tho, so I"m going to go back and read all of the other chapters.
Captain Kelsey chapter 3 . 10/6/2006
KIDS!and i cant believe I'm dancing with PHIL *cough* , i cant wait!wish it was .:)keep writing, foo.
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